Feedback Response

Some of the good points of the video;

- Good lip-syncing and performance.

- Effective ending.

- Parts where the band gets active are good.

Points for Improvement;

- More cuts and edits during the performance are needed.

- A more interesting intro is needed, rather than focusing on Nathan for longer periods of time.

- Performance is quite static, re-shooting performance sections may be necessary.

- Male singer is needed rather than Sunny, although her performance is good.

Suggestions on Improvement; 

- Introduce a story or event in the video at the start to make it interesting and hold attention.

- Include more camera angles and close-ups, especially on instruments.

- Make the band more active.

- More energy is needed and a more appropriate dress-sense is needed to make the video more appropriate for the genre.